here is the link to the padlet
WALT: assess our writing using a rubric
WALT: create a goal for the next time we write
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Topic: ANZAC
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To be able to assess our writing and create a goal accordingly
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Our Reflection Writing Frame:
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Write about two things you did well. You could start with a sentence like:
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[Write your ideas here - at least 4-5 sentences]
I am proud of my work and my Researching World War 1 because i am
done and put it on my blog and my blog log.
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Write about two things that you could improve on. You could start with a sentence like:
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[Write your ideas here - at least 4-5 sentences]
The thing i want to improve is make more Vocabulary in my writing.
Next time I will write
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Create your goal below. You will need to state your goal and explain why you have chosen it. You must start your goal like this:
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[Write your goal here - remember to use the sentence starter from above]
My goal for writing is to improve myself more than i am now.
My goal for writing is to put more Vocabulary.
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On cool maths games I found a game called pixel quest so I played it to see if it cool or not. Then when I played it was cool and also hard when you get up to 29, 30, 31, 32. Then when you past level 29, 30, 31, and 32 you go on the last page which is the hards page of them all. When you're on the last page Then try your best to try get on the last level and finish pixel quest. Research a game (play games) on coolmathsgames.com
WALT: Develop meaningful ideas by adding detail.
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Topic: School Holidays.
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about your holiday experiences.
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Text type: Recount
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Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
With a hushed silence...
The last post began to play…
We will remember…
Slowly we filed out of the hall…
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Plan:
Title:
P1: Introduction: Who? When? Where? Why?
P2: What happened? Why/How?
P3: What happened next? Why/How?
P4: Conclusion: What happened in the end?
How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?
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Once you have finished make sure to mark with a buddy or yourself using our Paragraph Rubric. Draw an image that represents your writing in sumo paint or ABC paint.
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