Friday, 2 December 2016


  1. Hook/Grabber
  2. Problem
  3. Solution
  4. Feeling Emotions Senses
  5. Transition words
  6. Similes
  7. The 5 W’s who volcano, Ruapehu, Taranaki. Where waitemata, Pacific, te moana nui a kiwa.

A long long time ago, as if we were in the days of the dinosaurs lived two proud maunga above and below the pristine pacific ocean.(hook/grabber) there two maunga were deeply in love s they were ranginui the sky father and papatuanuku the earth mother however, Maungarei stood tall above the sea as if he was sir edmund hillary and rangitoto below the the deep blue sea as if she was the earth's core.A few days ago he went down in the deep blue sea and saw her rise up but she cannot see im.every heve lava grew by listening his tune rangitoto was ready than ever to meet her  mountain through song karakia and hope rangitoto blew and rose from the sea but her back was turned to him maungarei was dormant like that of a inactive volcano until he heard his Queen latifah sing his song.There was then another eruption like that of the earthquake christchurch  and maungarei was then drawn to the side of his darling like a magnet(THE END)

1 comment:

  1. Hi Chyrus!

    I really enjoyed your story. It was quite fun and reminded me of the old legends I was told as a kid.

    You might not know me yet, but I'm Mark, a teacher working for the Summer Learning Journey you signed up for at the end of term.

    I just thought I would remind you that the learning journey still exists for you if you want something different to do during the holidays. There are loads of activities and learning opportunities about travel and the world if you are interested. The best part about it is that you get to choose what you learn. The second best part is that there are lots of people from other countries commenting. The third best thing is that quite a few of your classmates have already joined in!

    I just thought I better say something so you didn't miss out.

    Have a great holiday anyway!