RAINBOWS END
On Tuesday the 22nd nov we went to a place called Rainbows End. The first thing that happened Mrs Tele’a put us in groups, there were about 8 to 9 groups. We got our bags ready and we all waited for the bus to come and pick us up. We waited, until we saw the bus drive by. We all got up and got ready. When we got there I was really really nervous because I saw the fear fall and it look so scary and it was very very tall.
We got off the bus and got into to 3 lines so the instructor can put on our wristbands. On each line after we got our wristbands on we went inside and line up again but in 2 lines. We had to talk to our buddy next to us then there was a haka i think that it was a thanks for fundraising and it is a privilege for the parents to come with their children. When it was all done Mrs Tele’a was angry because some people was eating gum at rainbows end it was awesome when we got there. When Mrs Tele’a let us go she said to meet up 12:30 to have lunch so we went off into our groups.
This is a recout for Rainbows end it is about what we did first and what we did later on when we got there.
Hi Chyrus, my name is Oliver Palmer and I am a year 5 student. I liked your story about Rainbow's End, because of the details that you have added in your writing. I like going to Rainbow's End as well.
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